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This is Dojin carried out based on original episode.
By "Avast Ye Eds"(last episode of 1st Season).
I'm sooooo poor at english.
So if there are unsuitable words, please let me know.
By "Avast Ye Eds"(last episode of 1st Season).
I'm sooooo poor at english.
So if there are unsuitable words, please let me know.
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Haha this is funny :] If you are asking for word corrections, not much is needed. It's pretty good except for a few small things. Here are the corrections:
Panel 2: I'll give you an enjoyable kiss! Oh my, we're outside...
Panel 3: And...as for our kiss; I want it to be more serious. So I decline, for now.
Panel 4: All right, then I'll give you an enjoyable ***... Ouch! Wait, wait, you're too rough!
You are lucky. You know Japanese and are learning English. I have been learning Japanese in school, but it's hard ;A;
Panel 2: I'll give you an enjoyable kiss! Oh my, we're outside...
Panel 3: And...as for our kiss; I want it to be more serious. So I decline, for now.
Panel 4: All right, then I'll give you an enjoyable ***... Ouch! Wait, wait, you're too rough!
You are lucky. You know Japanese and are learning English. I have been learning Japanese in school, but it's hard ;A;