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EEnE-By 'Avast Ye Eds'

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This is Dojin carried out based on original episode.
By "Avast Ye Eds"(last episode of 1st Season).

I'm sooooo poor at english.:dead:
So if there are unsuitable words, please let me know.
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Haha this is funny :] If you are asking for word corrections, not much is needed. It's pretty good except for a few small things. Here are the corrections:

Panel 2: I'll give you an enjoyable kiss! Oh my, we're outside...
Panel 3: And...as for our kiss; I want it to be more serious. So I decline, for now.
Panel 4: All right, then I'll give you an enjoyable ***... Ouch! Wait, wait, you're too rough!

You are lucky. You know Japanese and are learning English. I have been learning Japanese in school, but it's hard ;A;